A hard-working mother named May Had very little time for play Although she worked very hard Her disposition was not marred So she felt very pleased every day
Your scansion limps here and there: may I suggest a metrically correct version?
A hard-working mother named May Had hardly a moment for play. Though she worked very hard, Her good cheer was not marred, So she felt very pleased every day.
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Your scansion limps here and there: may I suggest a metrically correct version?
A hard-working mother named May
Had hardly a moment for play.
Though she worked very hard,
Her good cheer was not marred,
So she felt very pleased every day.
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